Peer Review 1

Three Words And A Wedding

“Seas of rolling green dotted with grazing cattle and Australian bush merged into one blur outside of my passenger window.”

Such an amazing opening line to a beautiful paragraph! The imagery and emotion conveyed in this single line is unmatched. As a reader, I can already imagine the scene being expressed in this blog.

The blur of the day is captivated in the quick turn of events and the shift in the tone between the beginning and the end of the blog.

As a reader, I felt as if I had experienced the same feeling Teneillie had written about. Your writing was succinct yet captured the day perfectly. There was a balance between emotion and setting that perfectly explained the feeling that I felt whilst reading it.

The love written to be shared between two friends was relatable and triggered memories between me and my friends which I hadn’t experienced in a while, especially with COVID running its course.

I could not fault the writing, however I do wish that it was a little longer to fully draw out the moment and emotion. With that being mentioned, the point of the blog is to be a short memo, so it’s definitely something that I could overlook. I suppose it was so well written that I wanted more!