Hi Michelle, I really enjoyed your letter to Patrick White and especially the way you related your experience with the youth of today with his writing. I also noticed that you focused on what you took away from his writing, which is what the author is after – for his readers to think! You wrote …
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Peer Review – Anna
Anna’s blog is found at https://literaturewithanna.art.blog/2019/09/16/a-letter-to-patrick-white-about-my-thoughts-on-down-at-the-dumps/ I enjoyed Anna’s letter to Patrick White regarding her thoughts on his writing, “Down at the Dumps”. She made great reference to the theme of the writing and explained it well. I found that by mentioning the themes and giving examples, her letter became more authentic and flowed better …
Peer Review – Natalia
Natalia’s blog is found at https://literaryworld.home.blog/2019/09/01/blog-3-creative/ I enjoyed reading Natalia’s creative piece. It was short and succinct which was necessary considering the word limit placed on the blog. My criticism would be based on the fact that there was no action to show emotion. I understand that the task was to create a conversation, but …
Peer Review – Issa
Issa’s blog is found at https://issaalbabaacu2019.art.blog/blog-feed/ Reading Issa’s blog on Syria was so detailed that I almost felt as his experiences were mine too. His explicit description of his environment, from what he saw to what he smelt, was important in creating an image of his experiences and assisted with understanding his point of view. …
Grace Mokdassi 